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I've moved the word "thus" out and changed ending into two sentences. The way the previous version read it suggested that small size alone was responsible for the ability to fly at a high altitiude, which is a bit silly. --[[User:Andrew|Andrew]] 07:37, 30 January 2007 (PST)
 
I've moved the word "thus" out and changed ending into two sentences. The way the previous version read it suggested that small size alone was responsible for the ability to fly at a high altitiude, which is a bit silly. --[[User:Andrew|Andrew]] 07:37, 30 January 2007 (PST)
 
I removed the comment about endurance, since it isn't mentioned in the text.  Lung Yu Ping only reported flying in for two hours upon reaching Macao -- Laurence surmised that the Jade dragon couriers work in relay. 
 
--[[User:Jhkim|Jhkim]] 11:40, 30 January 2007 (PST)
 

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